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thanks.
Like you have said in the description, there is so much love in this photograph but the person is caught up in the negativity.
The first thing you notice is the hate slip of paper, i think that hate (being such an angry word) should be written allot harsher, maybe in jagged scribbles or edgy letters to emphasise the hate.
Having said that and moving on, i like that you have put all the focus into that piece and left the others out of focus, adding to the emphasis.
As with the need for harshness in the hate paper, i like that you have added differences on the love pieces and the changes in font that are softer and more delicate, adding to the love vibe.
Something that could make this better (in my opinion) is use of minute bits of colour maybe an angry red for the word hate or some calming blues or girly pink for love which could add emotion into the photo.
Overall though, good job and good technique
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